anyone here?

(OCC- yes, i want to speed it along alittle if thats ok.)

Plineco and silver stream smiled at bella and laughed. " we went and were silly," said silver stream with a deep laugh."

Silver stream went to go play with silver and kasara. Plineco nickered" hello beautiful. long time no talk." he nuzzled her neck and took in the moment missing her so much.

Bella giggled and nuzzled Plineco back "Yeah... Long time no talk, indeed... And I love you....." she smiled.

The foals played tag.

Diamond and Rose trotted around and again talking their stuff.

Cloud nuzzled Luca and grazed.

Plineco nuzzled back and trotted off to his "tree".

Luca smiled and rubbed her head into his neck. " i love you cloud, i feel so safe with you. " she said as she stared into his eyes.

Plineco settled and perked his ears at a twig crack. He stood breathing hard yet slightly relaxed but still tensed. Just then he saw two stallion, young, a few years older than his young colts. They were muscular, big, and strong. He snorted and sighed. They were together powering their way through the terriorty. He neighed at the group and reared. He approached the stallions angrily.

The foals noticed the stallions and Silver ran to Diamond, Silver Stream ran to Bella and Kasara ran to Rose.

Bella, as lead mare also reared, but stayed put to her foal just in case.

Cloud nuzzled her "I love you too..." he whispered, looking her in the eyes. He then looked at the two new stallions and stood protectively in front of Luca.

Diamond and Rose hid their foals.

plineco trotted up and asked there buissness. they apologized and plineco stepped aside for them to pass. The two stallions looked over the group. They snorted and oviously didnt care, they passed through the camp and left.

Plineco turned to the group with apologetic eyes," they were just passing through, not threat, im sorry for the false alarm." he walked with his head down. Bonita saw somthing was wrong and went over to see. " whats wrong hun?" she asked helpfully.

" oh mother! i feel im getting old and i feel like a failure. I just feel i cant do this." he whimpered to her.

she looked shocked and said this harshly" Plineco! dont you say that! your younger than a new born, and you do fine!" she looked stern and nudged him lovingly. He smiled and she walked off to rest. He smiled weakly and walked around the camp looking over things.

(( were those two stallions the one you created? ))

(Occ- they were but no, i want the foal to be born and get to be a teenager. so she can have an older boyfriend! so plz hurry!)

plineco grazed on the weeds. He looked around to see if anyone just noticed his point of losing it. Luckily no one seemed to notice. He smiled dryly and sighed.

Luca smiled at cloud. " i love you!" she chirpped happily to him.

(( soz. and ok. fast forward -- foal birth done, now they are teens ))

Bella walked around as she looked at Silver Stream and Nia (the filly) play with Silver and Kasara "They grow up so fast.." she whispered and went over to nuzzle Plineco.

Cloud nuzzled her "I love you too." he smiled happy and neighed.

Diamond and Rose looked at the grown up foals and sighed happily "Good old times..." then they grazed.

(ok thx!)

Plineco smiled in agreement, and nuzzled bella reasuringly. Winter passed quickly and spring was apong them.

Plineco woke up and smelled the air. It was spring, time to go back to the summer home. He got up slowly shaking the dew from his mane.

( no prob. )

Bella smiled and whinnied for the herd to follow.

The foals bounced over and followed.

Diamond and Rose also.

Cloud nuzzled Luca and followed.

Plineco followed up the back and the herd started moving. He whinnied in rejoyce slightly. The day was warm and they were heading to their summer home. Luca went near plineco to talk to him.

" hows the herd?" she chirped again. Plineco felt this day was going to be good. He smiled and said" its good, today is a good day!"

she smiled and nuzzled his chest dipping her head in respect.

After two days of travleing, they finally came to their home. Plineco looked over the ridge happily. Plineco watched his herd gallop down the ridge and eat the sweet grass. He reared and whinnied to his herd, " we are home," he wispered. Today was a good day, and nothing could ruin it.

(( soz about the late replies... my mom is gonna put a code on my computer and I might not reply as often as before ))

Bella trotted up to Plineco and reared with him.

Diamond and Rose looked up at them and let out cheerful whinnies.

Silver Stream, Silver, Kasara and Nia reared and then galloped around the grassy meadow, enjoying the day with happy whinnys.

Cloud stretched his front legs one by one and looked around, tail flicking.

(the stallions come now, but plineco doesnt know, bella will but just watches secretly, plineco is seeing the " great ones" its secret, so he doesnt know.)

Night came on creeping feet, slowly but lightly. Plineco knew he had to sneak off and speak with the " great ones". The rest of the herd was sleeping, and he sneaked off to the near by lake in the woods. Plineco winked at cobalt before leaving, knowing he would look after things. Cobalt nodded curtly, Plineco headed to the lake shore. He pawed the soft sand steadily waiting to be called. A gust of wind crept up his neck and weaved through his mane. The leaves wispered to him and grazed by his ears. He lifted his head and closed his eyes. He let the "great ones speak to him" unfortunitly they said that a terrible hardship was to come upon the herd. Plineco's face scrunched into a hurt expression, he didnt know what would hurt the herd but somthing would.

(this is back at camp were the stallions come, they taunt the "beautiful" teens, aka the foals. Plineco is still at the lake. Cobalt is dozing, stupid stallion! jk)


Two teen stallions(on the older side, like young adult, all the mares fall for them)
crept into the camp, they spotted them from afar and saw there was no lead stallion. They knew plineco a little and knew he was their leader, with him not in site they went in for the kill. Loke and Koro had not stealen any mares yet. They didnt plan to but just wanted somone to court. They saw some younger but still near their age group mares. ( that would be our foals, and the mares notice them... so plz put that in ur next post.) They nickered and walked around, they cantered around the herd, kicking up their heels and played silently. Koro had his eye on a significant mare, and so did loke. They left after chosing and playing, they would be back.

(( kk, could you describe better "which mare they eyed"? thanx ^^ ))

Bella noticed the two stallions picking "Wha-?" she snorted angrily under her breath and trotted in their direction, but circled back to the herd.

Nia eyed Koro with a light smirk as they trotted around. But wait, they were on Plineco's lands! She stomped her foot, tail lifted high up. Her head shot in the air as she walked off, legs kept high while walking. She is the daughter of a Leader! (( making her form...))

Silver Stream and Silver just stood there and watched the two stallions, eye-wided as they dared to enter the grounds.

Kasara rolled her eyes and sighed. She went off to graze.

Cloud was grazing next to Luca.

( yes, they eyed nia and kasara, koro is for nia, and loke(his name is pronounced (low-ke) is for kasara.)

The stallions were excited, koro eyed nia as she was sleeping then getting up and getting mad. He snorted and snickered in the woods, stil looking at the herd. Loke was unintrested in everything but kasara, he was enamored. Though he was the stronger of the two, he didnt act like it sometimes. They walked off alittle ways and waited for the next night. Plineco returned to a alarmed herd, he smelled the stallions and got mad. He snorted and scent marked the borders again and again. He came to bella and nuzzled her reasuring her. He came to Nia and sighed " is everyone all right?" He pressed his muzzle on top of nia's mane, breathing out. He protected nia with his life, he was VERY close and attached to her. He smiled and paced the borders. He came to cloud and spoke to him saying " i want a patrol along the boreders from now on, you and cobalt will go and patrol the woods. ok?"

Cloud nodded at Plineco "As if." he lifted his head and walked off to one part of the borders.

Bella sighed and grazed, eyeing up the foals.

Rose went over to Kasara and nuzzled her "Mom, I'm grown up!" Kasara giggled "You will remain my little filly, Kasara." she smiled with a laugh-sigh.

Diamond nuzzled Silver who neighed and groomed her mother's back "I love you mom..." she whispered as Diamond groomed her back, back and whispered "I love you honey.."

Nia nuzzled her father back, then went off to a trot with her brother Silver Stream.

Plineco gave cloud a warning look to show more respect. Then walked off to the ridge and stood grazing wearily. Cobalt bobbed his head to cloud and they set off for the stallions scent, in the east border. Silver stream, whinnied stupidly and trotted up to silver looking around as if to guard her.


Cobalt and cloud were already through the woods. Cobalt sighed and said" you know your getting on plinecos bad side again?"

he looked at the stallion wearily, feeling sorry that this happened. " anyway we should follow the scent of those two young stallions, what do you say?"

Cloud eyed Colbat "I'm doing as he asks, but if he isn't showing any thankfulness..." he paused "It wont be my fault I obey him as Lead Stallion." he said and kept on after the scents.

Bella walked over to Rose and Diamond. They nickered something to each other and went to the creek.

Nia and Kasara grazed, while Silver glanced at Stream blushy and with a light grin.

Cobalt sighed and kept sniffing. Then he saw the stallions, they were hiding near a holly tree, near the dry stream bed. He breathed slowly and looked to cloud. " what shouls we do? should we capture them and bring them back to plineco?" he asked.

(back at the camp)

silver stream smiled a toothy grin and pawed the ground letting his mane fall over his shiny muscular neck.

Plineco nickered to himself, reassuring himself everything was alright. Bonita walked over and nudged his shoulder playfully. he gave a wry smile and looked over the land. " you do your best son." she said quietly and began walking down the slope. He smiled after his mother and waited for cobalt and cloud to return. The air had turned cold, and so had somthing in him that day.

"Ladies first." Cloud teased "Okay, you decide." he snorted lowly, looking away, then back at Cobalt.

(at camp)

Sliver nuzzled Stream affectionly and looked into his eyes charmingly.

Nia sighed and went over for a walk around the camp with Kasara. They talked their own stuff.

Bella, Rose and Diamond had finished their walk-around-the-creek and trotted back to camp.

Cobalt gave him a roll of the eyes and pawed the ground, then shook his head from side to side playfuly. " love you too man!" he said biting back the joke. " lets get' em!" he said confidently and squared his shoulders. Then pinned his ears, beared his teeth, and did a slight buck heading over.

( the male rouge stallions-loke and koro)
They saw the two OVIOUSLY more alite and big stallions. THough they didnt differ that much in size they were still growing. Koro looked wide eyed like a dear in head lights and froze. Loke snorted discustedly and pushed his weight into his friend causing him to move. Koro tossed his head and ran catching up to an already ahead loke. ( Loke was the quicker thinker. though you would never know it. they were forceful rouges, stupidly young and foolish. They were dangerous and not to be messed with at any cost, at least somtimes!)

(cloud and cobalt)
They chased them circling a long way around rounding the rouges. They ran around in circles casting the rouges into a confused dead end. They snorted and stopped taking a side, the two rouges in the middle and cloud and cobalt on the outside. They couldnt do anything now. They walked and brought them to the camp.

Plineco stiffened and looked over to them. He glared at the males, and koro turned away. Loke boldly glared back with more procision than before. They eyed eachother. Plineco snorted and galloped down the slope to meet cobalt and cloud. " so this is who you guys found.. thank you, ill deal." cobalt stayed just to make sure they didnt run.

" why have you come?" plineco interigated.

" we were looking at competition and mares." said loke having no resentment in his voice.
plineco snorted and looked over at the herd, who were wide eyed and in a bad mood. "Well you can stay here for a while, as prisoners sort of. just dont do anything youll regret and well be fine!" he said bitterly happy.

" i regret nothing!" loke said with vengence. plineco came up two inches away from his face and gave him a cold stare, sneered then went up to the ridge. They backed off and cobalt led them to a little spot 8 feet away from the herd. He and cloud stayed and watched.

(( Few words - Please, do not god-mod Cloud. ))